REALISTIC HumanStuck Fem-Tav (ZOOM IN )

Somehow I made it happen It looks 'OKAY' at best since its my first time drawing lineless without at least having a sketch. Anyway I see things I want to change but my hand is numb.SO I WILL GIVE UP HERE.

ALSO Im doing PAPER CHILD COMMISSIONS
Each One is $1USD or 80 Points
Plus each extra character is $0.50USD or 40 points.
And they can be mail upon request.
I take payments through Paypal,The Mail,or Points.